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Willie Apiata was born in june 28 1972 mangakino nz. He won a Victoria Cross for rescuing a wounderful comrade under fire in afhanistan in 2004. He has 8 ribbons.




Jerry Matepare he was born in November the 14 1954.

In April 2013 Sir Jerry travelled to Afghanistan to mark the end of New Zealand Defence Force's deployment there. He got famous for being the Governer General.

maths

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Student commence

what was i think was good about it?
Good getting extra wedbsites to work on your maths whiting reading.
Good to know what to work on in maths whiting reading so you can improve it.

what could make it better?
I would liked to have a little bit longer so i can share some of my whiting.

what did my perents think about it
Good to help compare improvement levels by year ends.
it was good to see sample of your work port folio.
Good to meet your teacher.

 





  

DANS MATHS?

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Swimming Recount Blog post

WALT: identify area of need from writing sample feedback and make a conscious effort to improve that area.

SC: Co-constructed

- paragraphs if a focus

- Punctuation that you don’t normally use

- similes and vocabulary that you dont normally use - thesaurus

- Ideas - simple to complex. Lots of detail.

my focus is..detail and spelling.

this photo show the year 8 boys starting an intece race. they dived in like flying dolphins.it was like a herd of elephents. derron lost his balance??and fell into the chilli cold watar.at the end it was all very close but cody took it out.

the second photo shows the red ami resting and talking to frends on the seats.as we know it was a boiling hot day it felt like we were right by the sun.

the third pic shows the year 8 boys competitively competing to the finish.as you can see cody is about to have a pain full day ahead of him.